could do with a makeover
good work but could have been much better.
the volume on the voices is far too low against the loud sounds and bgm.
in a couple of spots, there was character movement left out or looked over, such as when she stands in the doorway. at least make her breathe, or look startled...
not bashing, btw, just commenting.
keep it up!
good job on the 3d motion.
aside from that, terribly unoriginal and boring.
still, nice 3d ^^
The movie was awesome... you're obviously a great artist and animator...
But... minor thing...
Surely, he ought to have wiped off his sword, before sheathing it! That is far too careless a mistake for someone as skilled as himself to make.
Your movie was cute.
This was the wrong place to submit it though.
However, it seems to be becoming more and more excusable to let live actions into NG >.<
Maybe they should start a new portal for these things ^^
Anyway, it was cute.
The poor siezure dog drank my soy sauce! O_o
Hehe, thanks for using my song!
Good job again, to all the artists ^^
hehe, I told you I might use one of your songs didn't I? ;) glad you enjoyed me using it :)
This may be the shortest, least-skilled movie I have not blammed, but....
Hehehehe... it made me laugh! ^^
<3 to you.
if it survives, it may just make its way into my favorites list, so I can watch it and smile from time to time.
Hehe! fun fun
Well, not much to say, you're up there.
You've got the storyboarding and directing skills most people dream of, and everyone loves; and the willpower to put time into a production.
Even the talent to make an actual good movie using cheap sprites.
Awesome job, Angel.
I'd love to see more work by you. ^^
It was all (art, animation, sound) fairly mediocre.
Work a bit on the skills. ^^
On the other side (effort, creativity) it was at least above average, so commendations for that.
I had to turn my speakers up and down several times because of the changes in volume on the recorded voices.
If not for that, I would have given it a 3. I gave you a 2 though, high enough to save, at least.
Maybe Too slow...
Thanks for mentioning the EXTREME slowness in your comment, I don't mind it so long as I'm expecting it.
Anyway, I enjoyed the creativity and time you put into this very much. I value these things much more than Flash skills (which could use some improvement ^^;).
Overall good job! ^^
I hope I never end up in an elevator with you.
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