could do with a makeover

good work but could have been much better.
the volume on the voices is far too low against the loud sounds and bgm.
in a couple of spots, there was character movement left out or looked over, such as when she stands in the doorway. at least make her breathe, or look startled...
not bashing, btw, just commenting.
keep it up!

nice 3d..

good job on the 3d motion.
aside from that, terribly unoriginal and boring.
still, nice 3d ^^

Nice ^^

The movie was awesome... you're obviously a great artist and animator...
But... minor thing...
Surely, he ought to have wiped off his sword, before sheathing it! That is far too careless a mistake for someone as skilled as himself to make.
^^;

fix it

there are problems too numerous to list with this thing.
aside from that, it's another fking soundboard.
no skill involved.
and you still failed.
0/5